Comments on: Sunday Haiku 6

By: Joel

Joel — Sun, 02 Jul 2006 15:19:29 +0000

Growing up, today
Young canaries leave the nest;
Next year, our daughter.

mojofilter — Sun, 02 Jul 2006 18:38:31 +0000

It’s microsoft draw
Exponential looking func
Two stinking hours

It’s microsoft draw
Richest man in world helps poor
Grad students suffer

Yes microsoft draw
Break out the head medicine
Or bang against desk

Mrs Eaves — Mon, 03 Jul 2006 12:20:16 +0000

No problem, AT
You were just being honest
(See 7/1 post)

Netmom — Tue, 04 Jul 2006 13:13:02 +0000

There are some kind words
for the expectant mother,
music to her ears:

“What are you doing?
Your skin is radiant now,
you just seem to glow.”

Or, for later on,
“you don’t look pregnant at all
from the back, my dear.”

I burned my belly
sticking out so far ahead,
ironing his shirts…