Comments on: Sunday Haiku 10 (LPSH edition)

By: Bosphorus

Bosphorus — Sun, 30 Jul 2006 13:43:37 +0000

Pink, or Red Squeeky,
both kinds are admissable
for all assmonkeys.

Atomictumor,
your toy, pinky, squeeky
hammer squeeks loudly.

Pink, squeeky hammer–
memory of another
the kids used to have.

mrs. eaves — Sun, 30 Jul 2006 14:08:12 +0000

The man of the house
His staff: pink squeeky hammer
But what does GAC have?

If wars could be fought
With just pink squeeky hammers
No blood would be shed

NODBOB — Sun, 30 Jul 2006 14:58:12 +0000

Headaches we’d face then,
Not the ice cream ones eithier,
This is the real deal

Ice cream headaches, myth.
Just Mayfield running our minds
Sneaky Yumminess

daco — Sun, 30 Jul 2006 14:59:02 +0000

I totally screwed up my haiku. Spent too much time on it to do over so here goes…

AT gloats heâ€™s quite a man
Keeps his hammer down
At least thatâ€™s his pretension

When his woman gets cheeky
Look out girl it comes
She gets the back of his hand

When things are out of control
She puts him in line
GAC wakes ole boy up

When he is at his bravest
The wife breaks it out
This weapon that wreaks havoc

AT ducks when she swings it
He canâ€™t stand the thought
This little weapon of pain

His terror overcomes him
Brands fear in his heart
Cruel pink squeaky toy hammer

Joel — Sun, 30 Jul 2006 15:29:05 +0000

Squeaky toy hammer
Audible pink (or red) tool
Inspires best senryu

Haiku are sober
I have been writing senryu
Daco writes . . . Daku?

InSilverDreaming — Sun, 30 Jul 2006 23:02:34 +0000

pink squeaky hammer
listening to the nothing
buried in the sand