Sunday morning now

December 3rd, 2006 by Atomictumor

OK, morning post
Will be in the haiku form
No upsetting Joel

Had a nice morning
Pigpen and I went to church
G chose to clean house

I don’t think I’m yet
In a position to force
Church on him, just yet

He did a great job
And told me he felt Mom here
Said he talked to her

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Denomination
Of the church defies haiku
Its just too damn long

Unitarian
Didn’t think that’d work so well
Packs syllables in

Had a guest speaker
Talked about Papa Joseph
Folks groaned about it

Always liked ol’ Joe.
He’s a stand in the back guy
Do good, keep head down

I relate to that.
Romantic stoicism
Appeals to me, some

But I don’t live it.
If I did, I wouldn’t write.
Suffer silently.

I crave attention
But only at arms distance
Not in the ‘real world’
(Pigpen spilled his drink
Water all over my bed
Running around nude)

Joe’s deal is different
He got a knocked up woman
I’ve got a dead one.

But we both got lives
We didn’t expect to have
And by rights, could hate

Except I wouldn’t
Because I still feel lucky
For this life I have.

Forgot to mention
Pigpen’s cool 10 dollar toy
Is named “Average”

Pigpen and his amazing names... this is Average.

10 Responses to “Sunday morning now”



  1. Joel Says:

    Immobilizing
    Cold envelops everything,
    Drawing us closer.

  2. Allisone Says:

    Haiku must contain
    at least one word in error
    jsut to upset Joel.

    :)

  3. Joel Says:

    Haikus must never
    Confuse major differences;
    Hippie, not hippy.

  4. Joel Says:

    Hippy refers to
    The girth below the waistline,
    Not counterculture.

  5. The Bosphorus Says:

    My eyes are tired.
    Mrs. Eaves’ laptop is cool,
    hard to step away from.

  6. daco Says:

    Christmas approaches
    Far too much labor involved
    Should be easier.

    Sherry loves this stuff
    I can take it or leave it
    Should be easier.

  7. Jason Dufair Says:

    We are UUs too
    Don’t forget the other half
    Universalist

  8. jen Says:

    cool toy my son has 1 of them :)

  9. reddaisynow Says:

    wow. I thought your comparison with you and Joseph was amazing. Very thought-provoking. I am episcopalian, too, but we skipped church today. Again — visiting your blog I feel like in a way we didn’t. Thank you.

  10. Zapaper Says:

    in monday haiku
    can i say that AT is
    a damn good poet?