Comments on: Haiku

By: daco

daco — Sun, 14 Jan 2007 15:28:05 +0000

Thrilled to meet Leo
the mrs. and I will go
I just love that smell

MSueS — Sun, 14 Jan 2007 16:07:10 +0000

Parallel visions
Of the scene you expected
and Reality

Atomictumor — Sun, 14 Jan 2007 16:09:47 +0000

Ahh, hospital rules
G, Pigpen and I showed up
But no kids allowed

Germs, evidently
Kids are lethal to babies
We showed up, went home

Hospital building
Is just that, just a building
No sense in stress, right?

Allisone — Sun, 14 Jan 2007 18:29:50 +0000

Was wondering if
this day would be hard for you.
My thoughts are with you.

Atomictumor — Sun, 14 Jan 2007 18:47:08 +0000

Honey, every day
Over the past week or so
Has been hard for me

I feel lots of joy,
tho, over Leo’s safe birth
Trying not to dwell

Atomictumor — Sun, 14 Jan 2007 18:51:33 +0000

Oh, slickdeals dot net
Just bought 500 gig drive
For a pittance, man

And a 1 gig card
For mastaG’s camera
15 dollars cash

I love buying stuff
And then writing incomplete
haikus

sumgirl — Sun, 14 Jan 2007 23:24:57 +0000

went to meet leo
he’s a round and handsome boy
eaves looks really good :)

Jane — Mon, 15 Jan 2007 02:00:36 +0000

She is holding that baby…
and she is holding you too…

as I am (as are we all) in our thoughts and prayers.