…. haiku

February 11th, 2007 by Atomictumor

OK, so me and
Skeeter were at the silo
It was cold outside

If memory serves
We were discussing Matlock
And mechanics kits

Suddenly, the sky
Erupted with a huge flash
Scattered the chickens

A noise like a train
That ran off its girlfriend drunk
Echo’d through the plain

This lasted a sec
Followed by a deep silence
Stillness abounded.

So I leaned over
To ask him if that was a
Singularity

I was ignorant,
Skeeter, cosmopolitian
He’d been to town once.

He had boots and shoes
And some TV programming
On plastic cassettes

I was expecting
That he’d slap me on the head
For the dumb question

“Jesus, son”, he’d say
“A damn singularity
ain’t got no bright flash”

Instead of Skeeter
I saw a pile of gold
In a trucker hat

A deep peace filled me
It was replaced, directly
By some other things

7 Responses to “…. haiku”



  1. Joel Says:

    Best. Haiku. Ever.

  2. daco Says:

    No kidding AT…who wrote it?

  3. Jane Says:

    ooh. OUCH daco!!

  4. The Bosphorus Says:

    daco Says:
    February 4th, 2007 at 1:06 pm e

    Please follow the rules
    or haiku sunday will die
    thanks for listening

    heh…

  5. sumgirl Says:

    didn’t you use that
    haiku last week, too, daco?
    just saying, that’s all
    ;)

  6. bartley Says:

    recent scary dream:
    evil ghost of Abe Lincoln
    threatening torture

    i never comment
    on blogs or boards. too much like talking to people.

    my mind is going.
    there is no question about
    it. i can feel it.

  7. The Bosphorus Says:

    My washing machine,
    like two of my old neighbors–
    squeek, squeek went their bed.