Comments on: Spring Haiku

By: Suzanne

Suzanne — Sun, 20 May 2007 15:28:08 +0000

Spring within us all
The kind air breathing kindness
Everywhere hopeful

Netmom — Sun, 20 May 2007 17:15:51 +0000

Summer coming soon
No school, no race, relaxing
Counting down the days.

The Bosphorus — Sun, 20 May 2007 17:27:17 +0000

Kids outside playing
Eaves taking a nap, Wilco playing
Sunday afternoon.

Short work week ahead
weather forecast beautiful
sweet expectations

EmmaLeigh — Sun, 20 May 2007 17:47:59 +0000

Firing up the grill
Parents coming, clean the house
Trying to impress

Jane — Sun, 20 May 2007 17:59:18 +0000

Pentacost coming
The Spirit is a movin’
Do you hear a call?

Mrs Eaves — Sun, 20 May 2007 18:29:26 +0000

Eaves taking a nap?
Ha ha. Quiet just doesn’t
happen around here.

realtorchick — Sun, 20 May 2007 19:32:53 +0000

Change is everywhere
makes life a rollercoaster
Can’t predict whats next.

But I promise you
That time rolls on anyway
Might as well enjoy.

A buddhist told me
Change is inevitable
Invest in yourself.

Commit to the plunge
and go for life on high dive
Make the biggest splash!

Joel — Sun, 20 May 2007 20:11:06 +0000

Getting bike mileage
needed for Ride the Rockies
takes away the fun.

Beautiful weekend;
lovely scenery goes by
blurred by miles per hour.

The payoff will come
next month at twelve thousand feet;
vistas without pain.

daco — Sun, 20 May 2007 20:57:14 +0000

Can’t seem to finish
Trying to do a good job
Test case for a flip

How good is too good?
Can’t give it away you know
Don’t want, lose me arse.

southerncharm — Sun, 20 May 2007 21:15:41 +0000

Roses are red
Violets are blue
My words seem to rhyme
not a true haiku.

Atomictumor — Mon, 21 May 2007 01:46:29 +0000

New realization
School lets out in like two weeks
Ought to have a plan…

Guess whats better, tho
Pigpen will be back in school
A month before G

Zapaper — Tue, 22 May 2007 15:09:03 +0000

It rained hard all day
Puddles an anti-freeze green
Springtime in Beijing