A Sunday Haiku

July 15th, 2007 by Atomictumor

Wanna know the truth?
I’m barely hanging in there
Sometimes, on somedays

I don’t discuss it
I try not to dwell on it
Hide it all away

Remember that song?
Coral, “I still need you but,
“I don’t want you now”

Don’t know if thats right
Or the other way around
I’ve been wondering

Theres no sharp pain now
No bone-crushing sense of loss
Just misplaced presence.

I don’t feel her now
But I don’t really try to.
Afraid she’s not there.

Looking back is strange
Called her “raison d’etre”
Gave my life to her

But she went away.
Dead, like a leaf on a tree
No beauty in that

No, no poetry
Biological warfare
Stupid microbe crap

But I keep quiet.
I don’t speak about it, why?
Cuz I’ve heard it all.

I can’t explain it
Can’t take peoples reactions
Makes me furious

Stupid impulses
Don’t even know why they’re there
Resentment, anger

Mostly on the web
November, kept me going
Now, drives me crazy

For years I’ve written
AT’s a face I wear well
But nothing to say

I’m hanging it up
Gonna put AT away
With other keepsakes

Gonna be myself
Without that raison d’etre
See how that works out

This ain’t permanent
I’ll leave the shoutbox open
And might be around.

And trust me, I’m fine
You guys know me well enough
Tell you if I weren’t…

25 Responses to “A Sunday Haiku”



  1. jenwright Says:

    I love you, Jake.

  2. Suzanne Says:

    Just be happy, Jake
    You don’t owe us anything
    You will find your way

  3. Mrs Eaves Says:

    Haven’t written much
    on the ‘tumor. 60 posts
    to your twelve-hundred.

    I read ev’ry day,
    comment sporadically.
    Words don’t come easy.

    In my quiet way
    I am grateful, nostalgic
    for all you have said.

  4. Jane Says:

    Do what you have to
    Know that you are not alone
    We/she there allways

  5. daco Says:

    I’ve never known pain
    The pain that you know too well
    Hope I never do

    I have to believe
    That comfort will come someday
    If not, what’s the point

    Don’t know what to say
    I have no words to relieve
    Just know you are loved

  6. califdudes Says:

    Can’t wax poetic
    You know where you can find me
    If ya need/want to

  7. Allisone Says:

    You’ve got a huge support system. We’re all here if you need us. That’s not going to change - blog or no blog.

  8. Busy Mom Says:

    :(

  9. alice Says:

    I understand losing the muse. Take your time. Be patient with yourself. It’ll come back, or not. Either way is just fine. Keep the ‘tumor up, just in case!

  10. The Bosphorus Says:

    summer wind today
    made me think autumn is near.
    Unloading the van.

    Dog days of summer
    seems odd to think of season’s end
    mid-july evening.

    I know you’ll take care.
    Will wait for your return and
    drink my last Stella.

  11. Southerncharm Says:

    Understand.
    Until next time,
    Take care.
    Love and peace.

  12. Sher Says:

    Anger is ok
    A long step in the process
    Still, it must come out.

    Was told once that they
    See us at our most
    happy- clouds burst open.

    I like to believe this.

  13. girlfriend Says:

    I wish you love, laughter and peace.

  14. Bird Goddess Says:

    Peace be with you

  15. VA Bluebelle Says:

    I too, wish you only peace. Will be sad not to hear from you everyday, but you should do what is best for you. Big hugs.

  16. VirginiaGal Says:

    I’ve tried 150 different comments, none seem right. No advice, just sincere hope that your life gets better, and thanks for the inspiration.

  17. babbling Says:

    another turn in road
    of working through your sadness
    you’ll take the right path

    to get you through it
    just love the two sweet guys lots
    and then try to breathe

  18. Joan Says:

    Goodbye. I will remember you.

  19. newscoma Says:

    I can’t do haiku.
    No skills.
    But I will say, I dig you and I hope you find your journey.
    I can’t wait to buy you a frothy beverage and sit and talk about what ever you want to.
    I would like this.
    Hope you feel the same way.

    A candle is always burning.

  20. Mrs. Mallard Says:

    Was nice meeing (reading?) you and your family. I wish you the best. If you find any cool new bands, let us know. I always enjoyed hearing the new music.

  21. Missyb Says:

    Peace is near

    Though it seems elusive

    It will come

  22. Debbie Says:

    Wishing you and the boys my best.

  23. indemom Says:

    Can’t say as I blame you.
    Be well.

  24. P.J. T. Says:

    So it’s over then? Wow, I can’t believe it. Well, thanks for all of the insight, I really, really, appreciate it. If you’re ever in Nashville, look me up. Drinks on me.

  25. Cubicle 25 Says:

    I lost the love of my life 24 years ago. I’ve never really gotten over it. I’m happy that I had her love though. She is always with me and left me a beautiful daughter to remind me of her beauty.

    Still sometimes, the power just goes off and I lie around all day.

    Surely there’s a reason for this kind of stuff. We just don’t know it yet.

    Best of luck AT.