Comments on: Sick Kid Haiku http://www.atomictumor.com/2007/09/30/sick-kid-haiku/ Sun, 20 Jul 2008 07:09:13 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.1.2 By: The Bosphorus http://www.atomictumor.com/2007/09/30/sick-kid-haiku/#comment-46938 The Bosphorus Sun, 30 Sep 2007 13:50:03 +0000 http://www.atomictumor.com/2007/09/30/sick-kid-haiku/#comment-46938 The gut wrenching cramps, lots of runs to the bathroom, got a hold of me. The gut wrenching cramps,
lots of runs to the bathroom,
got a hold of me.

]]> By: Bullet http://www.atomictumor.com/2007/09/30/sick-kid-haiku/#comment-46939 Bullet Sun, 30 Sep 2007 13:51:14 +0000 http://www.atomictumor.com/2007/09/30/sick-kid-haiku/#comment-46939 God answers prayers...just maybe not the way you want him to. Tell G I said, "ahem...Ha-ha!" God answers prayers…just maybe not the way you want him to. Tell G I said, “ahem…Ha-ha!”

]]> By: realtorchick http://www.atomictumor.com/2007/09/30/sick-kid-haiku/#comment-46948 realtorchick Sun, 30 Sep 2007 15:46:57 +0000 http://www.atomictumor.com/2007/09/30/sick-kid-haiku/#comment-46948 On October's eve drinking coffee on the deck list'ning to disco. Funky form, disco hustle and funky chicken bright lights, silver ball. Embrace the bass line. slinky dresses and pant suits should make a come back. On October’s eve
drinking coffee on the deck
list’ning to disco.

Funky form, disco
hustle and funky chicken
bright lights, silver ball.

Embrace the bass line.
slinky dresses and pant suits
should make a come back.

]]> By: Netmom http://www.atomictumor.com/2007/09/30/sick-kid-haiku/#comment-46955 Netmom Sun, 30 Sep 2007 18:00:03 +0000 http://www.atomictumor.com/2007/09/30/sick-kid-haiku/#comment-46955 I hear the leaves fall on the deck I freshly swept like big confetti Hope G feels better and Pigpen find some Dad time in his autumn break I hear the leaves fall
on the deck I freshly swept
like big confetti

Hope G feels better
and Pigpen find some Dad time
in his autumn break

]]> By: sumgirl http://www.atomictumor.com/2007/09/30/sick-kid-haiku/#comment-46962 sumgirl Sun, 30 Sep 2007 19:30:13 +0000 http://www.atomictumor.com/2007/09/30/sick-kid-haiku/#comment-46962 i forgot my phone and totally missed your call so sorry, pigpen! i forgot my phone
and totally missed your call
so sorry, pigpen!

]]> By: Atomictumor http://www.atomictumor.com/2007/09/30/sick-kid-haiku/#comment-46964 Atomictumor Sun, 30 Sep 2007 19:40:09 +0000 http://www.atomictumor.com/2007/09/30/sick-kid-haiku/#comment-46964 Its OK Sumgirl, He was pretty broken up But got Burger King Thats his dinner choice So I went to pick it up But they're out of toys Just ain't Pigpen's day Its OK Sumgirl,
He was pretty broken up
But got Burger King

Thats his dinner choice
So I went to pick it up
But they’re out of toys

Just ain’t Pigpen’s day

]]> By: Punk HP http://www.atomictumor.com/2007/09/30/sick-kid-haiku/#comment-46974 Punk HP Sun, 30 Sep 2007 20:54:03 +0000 http://www.atomictumor.com/2007/09/30/sick-kid-haiku/#comment-46974 McDonalds Drive Thru The Cashier girl is Pregnant A new one each week Wife blames gas on me I blame gas on our large dog Wife's gas is the worst McDonalds Drive Thru
The Cashier girl is Pregnant
A new one each week

Wife blames gas on me
I blame gas on our large dog
Wife’s gas is the worst

]]> By: Vixen http://www.atomictumor.com/2007/09/30/sick-kid-haiku/#comment-46986 Vixen Sun, 30 Sep 2007 23:05:30 +0000 http://www.atomictumor.com/2007/09/30/sick-kid-haiku/#comment-46986 Hot again today Missing the cooler weather Hope it comes back soon Poor Pigpen and G Bad end of week for them Maybe Mon better Wanted you to know Been reading everything And see promise/hope Wish I had more time To be more supportive-ish You are doing great Hot again today
Missing the cooler weather
Hope it comes back soon

Poor Pigpen and G
Bad end of week for them
Maybe Mon better

Wanted you to know
Been reading everything
And see promise/hope

Wish I had more time
To be more supportive-ish
You are doing great

]]> By: Jane http://www.atomictumor.com/2007/09/30/sick-kid-haiku/#comment-46997 Jane Mon, 01 Oct 2007 00:26:37 +0000 http://www.atomictumor.com/2007/09/30/sick-kid-haiku/#comment-46997 Oh cruel irony!! Better luck next time MG It's school tomorrow Oh cruel irony!!
Better luck next time MG
It’s school tomorrow

]]> By: Atomictumor http://www.atomictumor.com/2007/09/30/sick-kid-haiku/#comment-46999 Atomictumor Mon, 01 Oct 2007 01:23:24 +0000 http://www.atomictumor.com/2007/09/30/sick-kid-haiku/#comment-46999 Thinking of BJ Talking with G and Pigpen Looking at pictures I still love her so But I don't feel any pain The kids laugh and play Its hard to believe That they suffered that huge loss But they did, and well No behavior woes No emotional issues As they always were We've all got problems But I truly know they're good Have a 'normal' life Love is nifty keen Its back in the neighborhood Doesn't tarnish past Octobers coming Fall will bring back memories But man, life goes on. Thinking of BJ
Talking with G and Pigpen
Looking at pictures

I still love her so
But I don’t feel any pain
The kids laugh and play

Its hard to believe
That they suffered that huge loss
But they did, and well

No behavior woes
No emotional issues
As they always were

We’ve all got problems
But I truly know they’re good
Have a ‘normal’ life

Love is nifty keen
Its back in the neighborhood
Doesn’t tarnish past

Octobers coming
Fall will bring back memories
But man, life goes on.

]]> By: Vixen http://www.atomictumor.com/2007/09/30/sick-kid-haiku/#comment-47013 Vixen Mon, 01 Oct 2007 05:28:41 +0000 http://www.atomictumor.com/2007/09/30/sick-kid-haiku/#comment-47013 True love feels no pain In the never ending time The long run of time I believe its true I know, my opinion And I know it hurt Love is a circle That can repeat itself Just differently True love feels no pain
In the never ending time
The long run of time

I believe its true
I know, my opinion
And I know it hurt

Love is a circle
That can repeat itself
Just differently

]]> By: Jane http://www.atomictumor.com/2007/09/30/sick-kid-haiku/#comment-47031 Jane Mon, 01 Oct 2007 12:33:50 +0000 http://www.atomictumor.com/2007/09/30/sick-kid-haiku/#comment-47031 Love lays foundation for strength in the face of loss That love will live on In many shapes/forms Never to be forgotten Always giving strength Love lays foundation
for strength in the face of loss
That love will live on

In many shapes/forms
Never to be forgotten
Always giving strength

]]> By: babbling http://www.atomictumor.com/2007/09/30/sick-kid-haiku/#comment-47050 babbling Mon, 01 Oct 2007 16:25:52 +0000 http://www.atomictumor.com/2007/09/30/sick-kid-haiku/#comment-47050 speaking of bad gas I smell like musty llama so my daughter says I only wonder how she could possibly know what that does smell like? speaking of bad gas
I smell like musty llama
so my daughter says

I only wonder
how she could possibly know
what that does smell like?

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