October Haiku

October 28th, 2007 by Atomictumor

Fire in the hearth
Waking at a new old place
Crazy plans forming

As the leaves drop down
The world starts playing ‘possum
And you think clearly

Thoughts go to last year
The last few days with BJ
Before the sickness

Thoughts of tomorrow
They come just as easily
With a girl I love

The girl in the past
Her memories sooth my heart
A smile of youth

Girl in the future
She holds my head in her arms
And she loves my past

It all collides well
Like leaves dropping from the trees
To fuel the beauty

10 Responses to “October Haiku”



  1. Allisone Says:

    YAY!!!

  2. Joel Says:

    Signs of hope are found
    With patience, unexpected,
    They bring welcome news.

  3. jenwright Says:

    With a grateful heart
    I share your hope and new love.
    Prayers have been answered.

    I miss an old friend,
    but hope to gain a new one.
    We’re all moving on.

  4. Jane Says:

    Crazy plans forming?
    When love comes round it’s crazy
    if you don’t listen.

  5. VA Bluebelle Says:

    To everything turn
    turn, turn. There is a season…
    Love is all you need.

    Woot!

  6. Bullet Says:

    Unless it’s a Sat.
    Don’t do anything big ’til
    We’re back home in May!!!

  7. Joan Says:

    Fall brings memory
    a life story told last year
    woman loved by man

    P.S. Saw this, and thought you might enjoy it…

    http://www.basicinstructions.net/2007/10/how-to-write-haiku.html

  8. Mrs Eaves Says:

    Last year, on this date
    GAC, AT, Bos, Eaves
    Shared homemade pizza

    Never would have guessed
    that within days, she would be
    fighting for her life

    There was one point when
    I wondered if I fed her
    bad pepperoni

    That seems silly now
    sounds like a dorky band name
    Bad Pepperoni

    I write this today
    and bounce between smiles and tears
    I welcome them both

    “Love is the province of the brave.”

  9. Jane Says:

    Ha! I like that Joan.
    Now we all what AT
    looks like with shaved head!

  10. Vixen Says:

    I am so happy
    That you are finding new joy
    Memories are good

    To let go, go on
    Trying to do that myself
    You inspire again

    You are the best guest
    Poster I have ever had
    OK only one

    Thanks