Moving haiku

November 18th, 2007 by Atomictumor

Mighty deeds are done
The old house has been emptied
Just needs to be cleaned

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We are both weary
Early mornings and late nights
Loaded 15 trucks

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Thats just this weekend
As in the past two days, mind
Thanksgiving deadline

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Flammability.
I set my hand on fire
But it didn’t hurt.

As she moved the fish
From the tank to the bucket
I started to think

That screwed their world up
60 gallon existence
Is the world limit

When we poured them in
After the tank was set up
I had to wonder

reincarnation?
Or something like that, hell man
I’m too damn tired.

3 Responses to “Moving haiku”



  1. Netmom Says:

    Funky curtain rods
    designed by frisky felines
    kittens are crazy.

    The house looks super
    you both worked too long and hard
    time to relax now.

  2. damama Says:

    Prop the fridge open
    Or it will smell bad funky
    In an empty house

  3. Denette Says:

    Saw you yesterday
    Driving a small SUV
    weren’t on fire though