Ramble haiku

December 16th, 2007 by Atomictumor

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I see you are still the same
Its been a while

Weekend visitors
Made the house feel warm and big
Thanks for coming, sis

Big projects at work
The big xmas retail crunch
Weekends off are good

She walked through the room
Showed me her leg shaving wound
She has such cute legs.

12 Responses to “Ramble haiku”



  1. Joel Says:

    First winter snowstorm
    Swept our daughter home to us;
    Holiday package.

  2. Jane Says:

    Shaving wounds-Brutal!
    A foot rub should do the trick
    Stay warm and dry, all!

  3. jenwright Says:

    Had a lovely time
    With my big brother’s family
    The past couple days.

    Thanks for keeping us,
    Even the bratty babies
    Interrupting cards.

    Our mingled families
    Fit well together, I think.
    How far we have come.

    (note: families = 2 syllables, like fam-lees :)

  4. Haiku police Says:

    “(note: families = 2 syllables, like fam-lees :)”

    Uh, no. You’re busted.

  5. realtorchick Says:

    eleven years since
    I first saw my baby boy
    my heart still feels full.

    precious buzzy boy
    becomes joe cool middle school
    love my little man.

  6. Suzanne Says:

    Haiku Police, huh?
    “It’s been a while” has just four
    even in the South

  7. aka Ladyfriend Says:

    Ease up, haiku fuzz
    Everybody makes mistakes
    Critics not welcomed

  8. Haiku police Says:

    Humor impairment
    Haunting this haiku venue.
    Some need to relax.

  9. Atomictumor Says:

    Holy friggin crap
    Sweet Jesus tapdancing Christ
    “CRITICS NOT WELCOMED”

  10. Jane Says:

    Ha ha!!

    Sweet Jesus Tapdancing Christ!!!

    I think we need a pic to go along with that.

    (It’s Monday so I’m forgoing the haiku, Mr Haiku Police!!)

  11. jenwright Says:

    Creativity
    Never hurt anyone, right?
    Family, fam-lee

    Wasn’t a mistake,
    It was quite intentional.
    Ease up, everyone!

  12. Vixen Says:

    Commenters always
    Make me laugh and laugh and laugh
    All have great humor