Comments on: Ramble haiku

By: Joel

Joel — Sun, 16 Dec 2007 17:11:42 +0000

First winter snowstorm
Swept our daughter home to us;
Holiday package.

Jane — Sun, 16 Dec 2007 18:39:59 +0000

Shaving wounds-Brutal!
A foot rub should do the trick
Stay warm and dry, all!

jenwright — Sun, 16 Dec 2007 21:25:04 +0000

Had a lovely time
With my big brother’s family
The past couple days.

Thanks for keeping us,
Even the bratty babies
Interrupting cards.

Our mingled families
Fit well together, I think.
How far we have come.

(note: families = 2 syllables, like fam-lees :)

Haiku police — Sun, 16 Dec 2007 23:30:11 +0000

“(note: families = 2 syllables, like fam-lees :)”

Uh, no. You’re busted.

realtorchick — Mon, 17 Dec 2007 01:23:43 +0000

eleven years since
I first saw my baby boy
my heart still feels full.

precious buzzy boy
becomes joe cool middle school
love my little man.

Suzanne — Mon, 17 Dec 2007 02:32:46 +0000

Haiku Police, huh?
“It’s been a while” has just four
even in the South

aka Ladyfriend — Mon, 17 Dec 2007 11:18:53 +0000

Ease up, haiku fuzz
Everybody makes mistakes
Critics not welcomed

Haiku police — Mon, 17 Dec 2007 11:57:33 +0000

Humor impairment
Haunting this haiku venue.
Some need to relax.

Atomictumor — Mon, 17 Dec 2007 12:03:28 +0000

Holy friggin crap
Sweet Jesus tapdancing Christ
“CRITICS NOT WELCOMED”

Jane — Mon, 17 Dec 2007 16:28:11 +0000

Ha ha!!

Sweet Jesus Tapdancing Christ!!!

I think we need a pic to go along with that.

(It’s Monday so I’m forgoing the haiku, Mr Haiku Police!!)

jenwright — Mon, 17 Dec 2007 20:52:41 +0000

Creativity
Never hurt anyone, right?
Family, fam-lee

Wasn’t a mistake,
It was quite intentional.
Ease up, everyone!

Vixen — Mon, 17 Dec 2007 21:39:25 +0000

Commenters always
Make me laugh and laugh and laugh
All have great humor